The Egg - Flash animation

This is an animation I had to make for college,
I've based mine on Yoshi and The Ring
If you've never watched the ring the odds are you won't understand this

I already know this is absolutely terrible XD
sadly part of the grading criteria is uploading it onto the web ¬¬
lard help me when I upload this to newgrounds
ANYWAY. even though I know this is lacking decent drawing, animation skills and half the sounds I need for it.. XD dodoo..

I just need comments, constructive critism please!
it's for my report


CREDITS:
television noises: Melissa
"you will die in seven days": Elliot