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This is an animation I had to make for college,
I've based mine on Yoshi and The Ring
If you've never watched the ring the odds are you won't understand this

I already know this is absolutely terrible XD
sadly part of the grading criteria is uploading it onto the web ¬¬
lard help me when I upload this to newgrounds :|
ANYWAY. even though I know this is lacking decent drawing, animation skills and half the sounds I need for it.. XD dodoo..

I just need comments, constructive critism please!
it's for my report



CREDITS:
television noises: Melissa :iconmelissary:
"you will die in seven days": Elliot
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:iconhardywren:
That's an awesome animation! Although, I didn't have any volume when I watched it...
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:iconlamontre:
That movie is scary D: she haunts me. Damn the Ring x3
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yummycake3 Feb 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
if that person waz coming out of my tv i would be screamn my head off then run into my room (even though its haunted) and lock the door not kidding!
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Rotarx7 May 21, 2009
its lol ;)
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steffne May 21, 2009  Professional Artist
hehe thankyou :)
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:iconwhitewabbit:
Y'know. I understand the 'WTF' guy.
I thought it could have been drawn better, particularly Samara, and the water SFX freaked me out. However I understand what a bitch flash it.
So well done.
Yoshi was super cute!
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:iconcr-1992:
cool sounds, the part with the slow moving tounge was funny. :) i liked the way yoshi was drawn but it looks a bit too messy and quickly done in some places. It may have been better if the limbs for the ring girl moved independantly when she was floating along the water.

There you go is that enough critisism :) but i like it.
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steffne May 21, 2009  Professional Artist
YAY critism!
report timeeee :D

and yeah i know it's uberly crappy
once this reports done i'll probably hide it in my scraps!
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